Would love an update to this. Really like to know who killed Lisa, coz I'm sure it's not Ianto.
Please, your readers deserve an ending to this story.

Update update update
Please please please

love this story!would be lovely to read more!

update please?

I know it's been a while since the last update, but I really enjoy this story. I've read it at least twice, and I kind of hope (a lot) that you might consider continuing it...maybe :) Regardless, it's wonderfully written.

This is so intriguing so far. I really, really hope you decide to continue it soon!

Fhjsghs, no! Not the Master ;A; That evil bastard's gonna fuck things uuuuuuup.

Please update soon w

Oh. I like this story. I sure want to read more soon. I love crimestories, and you're doing a good job with it. I really want to know who Lisas lover is. And I really really really hope that someone is framing Ianto, and that they have really good reasons for it.

But like I said, I do hope you update it soon.

Love from denmark

Happy to see another chapter...I was beginning to think you'd stopped writing it!

Looking forward to finding out who's Lisa's mystery man, too.

omg, wow, amazing chapter, so worth the wait, love how you have gotten all the characters in, love that mickey and rose and martha and lois and tosh work with/for jack, omg to the police officers being yvonne hartman and harry saxon, omg, wow, love that jacks business is set up in the hub, too awesome, love that ianto was so nervous waiting for jacks reply after he thought jack was cancelling, love the hand holding, too adorable, love it, love all the flirting too, aww, so can not wait for more, just too awesome, please try to update soon

This is a very interesting concept. I like it. Always loved a good crime story. Love the fact that you tell the two stories simultanius. That's not always easy to do. I don't know who did murder Lisa, but I'm guessing that it's someone you've let us met during the flashbacks. And I must say that I'm very curious about who Lisas lover is. I have a feeling that I know, but I'm not sure so I won't guess until you reveal his name.

Any way...hope you continue soon. Cause this is thrilling

Wow, this is a really good story! Like the swing between past and present, happy and sad, and I am so looking forward to the rest of the story!

Really well written!

lol, love the doctor, hilarious, he certainly would not look like a lawyer, omg, i cant believe lisa, purposely starting a fight so she could continue her affair, loving this story so much and cant wait for more

Oh dear - so many questions... what's going to happen to poor Ianto? Thanks for the update.

Intriguing they are all playing around can't wait to find out more. lovely update.