Even though The Empire Strikes Back is my favorite movie of the trilogy, this is my favorite scene.

I thought George Lucas was a genius setting that scene on a bridge. I also liked how you put that into your story.

Very good idea. I think that it was always sort of told in Luke's point of view, except in the first few scenes of ROTJ. So, I thought that it was a good idea to start with Luke, express how he was supposed to feel, even though that we saw it on his face because it was told, basically, in his point of view. I look forward to seeing your perception on how that night went in the eyes of the others. That scene was open for a lot of discussion, and this is an interesting way to bring it to the "Round Table."

However, I think that someone need to re-watch the movie because you left out a few key lines in there, which expressed a lot of emotion in a few words without expressing the plot. Again, I'm expressing the ingenuity of George Lucas and friends.

I thought it was an excellent start to a brilliant idea. I have to congratulate you on coming up with an excellent plot and showing the feelings exceptionally well. You definitely have a gift.

-WL

This was beautifully written. You definitely have their characters down well. I'd love to see this continued. :)

it was great please add on!

Really good!