Please continue this story I want to know how Charley finds a way to turn the bros back into their original forms.

'Helping hands in the garage'?
'Plan to gain possession of the ray, and find a way to turn back into Martian Cave Mice'?

:)

how can they have gotten drunk when they drink nothing but root beer?

Well, I do not know which pair you prefer, but either way maybe have Charley have a jealousy episode over Vinnie and maybe Vinnie actually seeing it for what it could be. That Charley finds him attractive... maybe even like-likes him. Maybe to overly sappy but it could be an idea... An old one but an idea.

Another one could be a series of awkward or embarrassing moments between Vinnie and Charley and take it from there.

A completely third idea could be Charley noticing something very obvious and is willing to help Vinnie, perhaps insert a moral struggle in Vinnie between "Yes, I want this" and "No, I shouldn't."

Also in between Charley's interactions between the guys then also incorporate how they handle the next Limburger threat. Work maybe under cover if Limburger and his goons don't know what the Biker Mice look like now. The transformation not meeting Limburger's expectations.

Probably not new ideas but they sprung to mind, so I hope it can get things going.

If you're still taking suggestions, maybe the Bro's can offer to help out around the garage. Between them they should have just about every female driver in Chicago there in short order, and I'd love to see the irate customer who'd try to bully Charley with the boy's around, especially Modo.

Add ofc. and old girlfriends

(snickers) Vinnie would be the one without his boxers...

embarrasing walk in where they're in an awkward situation! :D

Well supposedly what if she took each of them somewhere special, like a park or something and mingle or something, so any ideas of a pairing here or is it all three mice with Charley, I'm dying to know what happens

smut is always a winner in my book. it seems hard for vin to control himself, so why not have them alone while the others go on patrol or something. have fun writing whatever you choose to do:)

Well quite obviously, fighting is going to be way different for the mice and so is going to be walking the streets of Chicago. On the one hand it's probably a great chance for them to immerse themselves into Earth culture and get an idea of what else the planet has to offer (besides a brilliant and beautiful mechanic :P ). For once they can actually walk around and not claim they're wearing a costume (tho the mental image of Modo telling an overly flirtatious blonde that he's wearing a costume... priceless) - which will probably result in Charley having to find new uses for a wrench. It could be that certain things that are normal for us and will be expected of them now that they look human will cause some trouble for them and they might even be at risk of infecting themselves with something that was never an issue before (like measles - havoc potential there). And of course having human enemies gives Limburger a million ways to mess with them now... once he knows what they look like. Hope something inspires you to continue this. It's an awesome story. :)

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Just...WOW.

I hope (and pray) and hope, that you update this soon. LIke, really soon. *stares at story* Best one yet in my opinion.

Awesome so far! I always thought Modo would be black if he was human. Only thing I noticed was that in the first chapter you had given Vinnie Amber eyes but now they are blue.

I hope to see more of this story!

Wow! *blush* That was so... let's just say I loved this ;. I'm thinking same as inuficcrzy: How will he act around Charley after this "incident"?

Can't wait to read more )

Yay! You're back! That said, your smutty stuff? NOT A BAD THING! Hahahahahaha! Nice job! Keep it commin'! ...*blushes* I just realized what I just typed... Write Free!