I think this is a really interesting concept, featuring Tobi and Madara as his other side. It's probably a long shot that you would continue this... but I enjoyed reading it so far nonetheless and I'm really curious at how Eri and Tobi/Madara's relationship would develop

hehehehe aw, no chapter to continue to. . no fair. i want more.

o.o this was great. I liked how Madara did all the work, and Tobi spoke. What a . . . pervy moment.

aw. such a twist. ;_; that's my Tobi. ERI DON'T TAKE HIM AWAY! DON'T RETURN HIS FEELS! I don't care how cute you are! He's mine! ;_: mine i tell you...

I don't like sharing.

ehehehehe this is sooooo entertaining. Little bland with the writing, but what you got goin here is amazing. hehehe I love how Madara and Tobi share a body. It's amusing.

D I like the cliffhanger.
:( Aw poor Tobi, being rejected like that. Poor Poor Tobi.

ehehehe I wuv this. It's gonna get goooood. Huh?

kawai *,*

It's amazing. I love how you made the ideal of Madara being more of a demonic possession instead of Tobi being Madara's mask, if you will. I absolutely love it, and would love it if you continued writing. :)

i love this story its awesome please continue writing it you are a very talented writer and im begging you to update im dying to find out whats gonna happen next

love kittykat6625

Hi I really like ur story plz rite more ~

MORE MORE MORE MORE!11

good story, so update soon!

Tobi and Eri are so cute together :D

Yay! I was definitely waiting 4 a lemon! U did GREAT!