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That's an order, soldier! Hop to it!

This is a seriously fun idea for a story. Honestly a great concept!

Cool. Don't really get it, but cool.

Yo, stumbled across this in my alerts so decided to pop in and see if you had anything for it.

Love it !

Amusing story and explanation for the indestructibility of our favorite kanrinin! Also, interesting take on it! Funny, and wish for more now.

Goooood. Keep going!

And I have the weirdest vision on Mokoto taking a certain part off him at nights to 'keep the other girls safe' and returning it each morning. Of course how she ended up pregnant is another story altogether.

Very very strange. Good stuff though.

Ahh, I knew you were going to write another chapter. I loved it, well, most of it. I'm a fan of the original story for Love Hina, not the ill-conceived one they came up with because the word-play jokes would never translate. But still, awesome story, and just like before I have a feeling you're not done with this one yet because, simply put, you made something that's just too much fun.

Go for the cyborg zombie ninja

love it. very deadpool-esque humor. cant wait to see how far it goes.

I WANT THIS WORKED ON PLEASE. You are a great writer and this is truly a great alternate tale. I wonder what people will come up with next? I hope it is along the lines of "Keitaro turns invincible for 30 seconds if his life is at mortal risk a la Starman." Do you know how hilarious it would be to see Keitaro glowing the colors of the rainbow instead of being gibbed from a punch? And if Naru tried again it'd be like hitting concrete. That'd be hilarious. And put it mid-plot so Keitaro can get hilarious revenge.

awesome

So his immortality is like Hiden(in not 'ever' dying despite the injury), Kakuzu(self-sewing limbs), and Piccolo/Cell(regeneration, if the limb in question is too damaged).

Does that sound about right?

Also update soon please.