WHY!?

That's so sad! I seriously feel really bad now! Poor Toph!

Okaaayy... What in the world was up with that ending? You shattered my Tokka vision! You're a great writer but please, next time, warn a gal before breaking her heart? XD

Gahhh, I LOVE this story so much! :D I always go back and read it. Tokka is just so adorable. 3 Thank you for writing this. :D -gives yew cookies-

That. Was. Simply. AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGG

Wow. Just... wow. I can't put my thought's into words. That was so IC and brilliant and wonderful.

UGH, it's so damn late, but the first thing I'd do tomorrow is read the rest of your stories. I should have looked for them earlier!

Shir Sama, you're awesome! 3

so sad, i'm crying inside right now. you should write a sequel

אתה יודע אנגלית טוב מאוד. זה גם סיפור מעולה

This was really good but so sad at the end

That was a really good Tokka. Too bad Sukka won. I hope Toph stays strong and doesn't break.

thats so sad! poor toph!

I thought this story concept was really interesting, and I like how you wove it into the over all story arc of the series so that it could really have happened. But It makes me think that it would be neat to see a sequel to this story that takes place after the end of the series- exploring where relationships go from there...Does Sokka stay with Suki? Does the rock known as Toph ever wear down and crumble into love for another person?

Anyway, I enjoyed the story! thanks for posting!

I know this might sound strange but I LOVED the way you ended this! None of the happily ever after BS, like in twilight. By ending it a sad way you've made it MUCH more realistic.

oh...I'm sad now...this was very well done, It's really sweet and true to character. I also feel like each chapter was better than the last, that's awesome! The epilogue...thoroughly depressed me :(

I love how good the chapter were but I do not like how it ended, I mean it could have ended just a little better. But it was still good.

I think I just died a little.