So I found this story in my following list.. it's such a pity that you never did continue it. I'm still hoping for an update

please please please, I really hope you start writing and updating again. I know it's a long shot to hope for. But your writing is amazing, and the story so far you've come is to. so please update?

I don't think I can read this. This is literally infuriating me to the point I cannot breathe properly. Don't get me wrong, this is f*cking fantastic. SO SOSOOSOSOSOSO great. But, like, I WANT TIVA BABIES. And I can't have Jeanne here. I can't. I ABSOLUTELY CANNOT.

I just want Tony to get back with Ziva RIGHT THIS INSTANT. Also, so many kids to keep track of. AND WHY DOES DUCKY HAVE TO BE DEAD?

Jeanne is infuriating me. And I know you said you liked Damon. Personally, ANYTHING that upsets the TIVA HAS TO GO. I'll probably keep reading, but just remember, I AM HAVING CONNIPTIONS.

Just discovered this and am really intrigued by the premise. Will you be continuing this? Thanks for sharing. :)

This story is just as wonderful each time I read it. You do a really good job of fleshing out background characters really quickly and just enough so that the world of the story seems very rich, but not overdone and slowed down. If you ever decide to continue (oh please!), you've still got an audience in me.

pretty pretty please continue soon, it is to good to let it hanging where it is now

Will you be updating? This is a great story, I hope you continue it.

Oh gosh, don't stop! Please, please, PLEASE don't stop! *gets down on knees* This story is unlike any I've ever read on here, with complex characters and an equally complex plot. I'm just dying to see how you handle the Tony/Ziva/Damon triangle! I want to know whose baby she's carrying; I want to see how Ziva handles mothering Sophie and David with Tony at this strange half-there, half-not point in their relationship (it is clear she truly loves him... I so want to read their happy ending!).

You've woven such an intricate amnesia story and it feels SO real, from Ziva's flashbacks (which you do beautifully and with great detail, by the way- kudos to you for having such vast knowledge of foreign languages!) to her overwhelmed, conflicted emotions to her slowly easing into a totally new life ten years into the future. I want to see true love triumph, but Jeanne and Damon getting a happy ending regardless since you've created them to be such relatable characters (well... okay, Jeanne I ain't so worried about; I don't like how she broke up Tony and Ziva's marriage with fake photographs!). I just love everything about this story, from the children (Sophie's quirks ADORABLE!) to Gibbs' grandfatherliness; from Daddy!McGee to the "family" feel of the team. Your humorous descriptions keep me sucked in and I really, really hope you will consider updating soon! I'll eagerly anticipate the next chapter!

This just gets better and better. The story is so intricately weaved; Ziva's confliction just oozes off the page. I desperately want her to choose Tony, but of course only you can make that call :) I did have to laugh though when Damon was jerking her chain with the internet skull caps, haha, and then in the beginning when you had Ziva tie in Gibbs' retirement with the loss of newspapers. I just love your humor! Ziva with the children is so sweet, and of course her trying to figure out where she stands with Damon and Tony. Will she do a paternity test for the baby? I really want to know who it belongs to! Anyway, I digress. This is so fantastic; I just have to keep reading!

Haha. This chapter was so amazing, it leapt through genres left and right and I loved that! One minute romantic, the next dramatic, then hilarious, then sad... I admit I giggled when Ziva wondered if she had mothered McGee's children too. LOL poor girl thinks she became a slut after the whole Tony/Damon debacle and not knowing who the baby's father is. A tidbit I hope we will discover in a later chapter...? Anyway, this story is freaking awesome and it has so much depth and uniqueness to it. Well done!

This story slipped through the cracks on me for far to long. I absolutely love it and I'm a little sad that you have taken such a large break from it. The plot is absolutely excellent and I find myself pissed at Damon and Jeanne constantly for trying to pull two people apart that are meant to be together.

I truly despise Jeanne for doing what she did, but I also find myself disappointed in pre coma Ziva. I mean I know she saw the pictures and thought that Tony was lying more than he said, but seriously she never even disclosed that part to him. Ugh please continue this and update soon I have to see how this one pans out its incredible so far!

oww, i just read the story. I think it is wonderful. but i'll explain why because you can say it to be nice but i actually have reasons:

1. i love story's where the team is older and have kids are married etc.

2. I don't like Jeanne and Damon ( though Damon is very cute, because mostly they are just written evil, you tell the story with them on a way that could have been.

3. what you write doesn't come over as lame. You know sometimes you've got story's that tell that one of the team lost there memorie, but within a day or two they get it back. That is just lightly unreal, unlike your version.

4. the chapters are long, which i like, because it seems as if you really want to make a wonderful story, and don't want to end it soon

AND 5. the thoughts, and childhood story's are so well written, like they could actually think those things

so that's why I love your story, i'll look out for the next chapter

X Hugs,

hope you'll update this soon, I was re-reading it and remembered how I loved it the first time, I still love it now and want to see it continued

Please finish this story it is so well written and should very much like to know what happens.

Oooh, I am in awe of this! Fascinated by where it's going and how it's unpredictable. I don't know what's gonna happen and it's not nice to leave things unfinished! Pleeease contionue!