That end was very rom-com! I loved it!

"I said I didn't drink it, not that I didn't make it." HA!

The image of little Rory in front of the potting shed... You should write a potting-shed-era fic!

Asking him out for coffee! Priceless!

She actually gets on the wrong bus to stay with him! I'm dying!

Man, she's already flirting with him... and liking how flustered he gets!

Amazing! Their banter is all there!

Sweet and hot all at the same time - adorable!

Oh, my god! There are no words for this story! It was perfect! Thank you for writing it!

This was so good! I absolutely loved everything about it!

I have read this story a few times now, and I am sad to say that not once was I smart enough to review, so here it goes...

Seriously, loved it! I wish there was more like these, I think younger LL fics are the best! Awesome, awesome job!

Whoa! What a sweet, sexy, well-written story! I am so glad I found this. You captured this younger version of Luke and Lorelai perfectly with your dialogue and description. Bravo!

I love a good smutty story when it's written as well as this one. Great job!

Took me a moment to click with Mike Brady, and I still don't know if he ever designed a building with too few bathrooms.
Such a sweet funny moment when she trolls for a line from the "handsome specimen," but didn't get it.
Nice that you set them pre-receding hairline.
Very elegant treatment of the "are we in a relationship" question with the "can I take you out lots" discussion.
Very romantic smut, too, my favorite.

thank you