Very nice. Well written, and both Ilyana and Micaiah were in character. Very good descriptions too. Good work on this fic as well :D

I am not very familiar with the Fire Emblem series, but I decided that it might be worth it to give it a chance. I would have to say that despite the fact I know only basic storyline for the games this first chapter was very amusing. The way it was written was beautifully detailed and the characters seemed well portrayed, though you had only a short while to introduce them. Overall very well done, this makes me want to familiarize myself with the games so i can enjoy this story more(actualy i have wanted to play them for a while but havent gotten a copy yet). Anyways you are welcome for the review. And good job, have fun with the next 70 chapters

I like this. The third chapter was kind of iffy for me, but it turned out better than I thought. Maybe you should raise the rating after the Titania chapter, though.

Looking forward to your next chapter.

Yeah, I was also upset to find out that the Ilyana was the only Fire Emblem PoR veteran to be demoted in Radiant Dawn besides Jill. However, since she arrives early in the game, it's a lot easier to level her up and her stats become stronger than other characters because she gets promoted twice.

This story is pretty funny, and all Ilyana ever thinks about is food. Her killing all the enemy units singlehandedly with the assistance of the deadliest skill combo Wrath and Resolve is pretty cool.

I am liking this story, so please update some more.