A nice story, sometimes I struggled to keep up with it when you jumped around or expected the reader to know your thoughts :D but I still very much enjoyed reading it.

Amazing!

Wow! It was a wonderful ride, thank you!
I didn't expect Beryl will come to Serenity just with a dagger at night. I thought it will be more of magical sort, or even poison (she disappeared with green smoke!). I am still very glad she finally out of our royal couple's life though! Thank you for writing, I enjoyed it immensely.

Great job on the story keep up the good work

I concede that I do not know the game but the number 21 is written vingt et un in French - you somehow swapped the n and the g :)

This doesn't fit in with the manga very well...
By the way, about The Big Picture. Was it written by a fan? It argues that Crystal Tokyo is corrupt, and that the Black Moon wanted democracy. Did they say so? Did Death Phantom say so, amid all his talk about evil and darkness?

I loved this, great plot! Endymion & Serenity are so beautiful together! :)

I love your style - disclaimers that beauty isn't skin deep, comments that you're going outside of period to put someone in boxers - fantastic! Plus a great story.

Imagine them against Blank.

They'd get rekt so hard.

Remember, there is no such thing as a game of chance.

I rather enjoyed this story.

wait! can't you do a part where they find out that rini was their daughter from their future or something?! that would have been funny!

That was beautiful *3*! I'm telling you, i was pouring out happiness when i was reading this chapter especially when Endymion apologized like that! I know they will become good friends and soon or later great lovers (in and out of the bed ;P). Can't wait to read more!

Nice hit, Serenity! No, man can control you like that (even though you were liking it). I don't know why but every time i heard or read "what a woman" i always want to LOL XD! Good job and i can't wait for the wedding scene *getting tissues just in case*

Ooh, this is getting insteresting :3 i glad Luna is around and it fixs too pefectly that Serenity would pick her to be her lady in waiting. I know Mina is already in the story as Serenity's girl friend so i wonder when the other girls will show up...i guess i will just have to read and find out

I'm really liking this story so i'm going to keep reading it :)