A beautiful tag for this episode. I would absolutely have hurt Johnny not to be there for the funeral. Lovely, lovely writing

Never read this one, but darned glad I did!

I could so see something like this happening...you expressed Johnny and Dr. Brackett's emotions perfectly! (Especially when Brackett had tears falling from his eyes there at the end).

Well done! :)

-Robert

Nice follow to the episode.

The emotions expressed in this story are really good. Survivor's guilt is very strong for John, but I love Roy's efforts to dispel that guilt. You might write more to elaborate on the aftereffects of the disease, for all involved.

day to day tragedies that we often don't see, until they are personal to us.

Sorry for Tim, Brackett and Johnny. Wonder why animal control let her bring it into the country at all, really. But, there wouldn't have been a story.

Nice tag! So Kel Brackett does have a soft side, after all!

Wonder how long he put up with Johnny as a roommate?

Not bad, would have made a nice scene. I always said that story should have been a two parter. The Starsky and Hutch version of that story was good too, but I think I like Emergency's better.

Thanks for sharing your work!

This would have been a perfect scene for that episode. Thanks for writing it!

Very good! You do realize that Dr. Brackett never touched the monkey. He should never gotten sick.

Love it we all take life for granted we assume we will be there tomorrow know what I mean thanks for the eye opener good story

That was very touching and true to life!

Thanks!

This episode in particular could have had a very touching ending so I'm glad you wrote a tag for it. I think in the seventies when the show was made, it wasn't popular for men to cry on television or show emotion like they do nowadays on shows, but it would have been nice to see something like this tag played out.

great additional scene. Thanks for your brain overload...

Brilliant! I thought the same things about Tim and how Johnny would take it and instead they put that Romeo scene in there and a scene like this should have come first. The was a quick scene like they have them on the show and it would have fit. Oh well, that's what fan fiction is for. Sue