I like much this fanfic. When you put a new chapter? Is very interesting

I am confused yet entranced by your story, I like it.

It's been a long time since I've reviewed a story that I believe is worth reviewing. And damn, is this well worth it. I agree highly with the previous reviews, on the dialogue and the content and such with the story. Blimey, kept at it! You're sure to have more fantastic works in the future should you keep writing!

This was actually really cool! I agree with the previous reviewer-you've got a great and very strange style for exposition, which gives the entire thing a dreamlike quality. I'm curious to see where all this goes.

I actually read this last night, but I found myself thinking of your story in class today; that rarely happens, and if it's good enough to stay on my mind like that, it's good enough to review. :)

Basically, I think this is brilliant. You have a very unusual writing style-I mean that as 100% compliment-and your descriptions are simple and perfect and strange. I adore the weirdness of the whole thing. And, yes, as another reviewer said, your dialogue is spot-on.

The only thing I noticed was that you have a few grammatical errors throughout. I normally find this jarring to the point where I won't read stories with such things, but its a testament to the quality of yours that I didn't REALLY mind. If you'd ever like someone to give it a quick proofread for grammar, I'd be honoured to oblige.

I'll be waiting on tenterhooks for the next chapter. :)

PR

I am so glad to see an update after so long! Maybe the release of Cata helped with muse, but I love this chapter as much as the others. Your writing is vague but right to the point, and I just love the simplicity of it. No overflow of details, but what is needed to be conveyed right there. Cannot wait to read the next chapter, and happy holidays to you~ -

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! Please Continue!

You have some very good dialogue skills, I can see.

Quite an interesting story so far.. I like the way you wrote out the battle scenes.

Darn, I missed the last 2 chapters you updated. I really need to check my email for alerts.

:( How dare those noobs send Rhys to her death, and now she finds herself in some kind of mental prison.

Links is awesome as ever, her ferverence and loyalty to Rhys is very admirable.

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P.S. Considering Rhyn is 'the Insane', is she exalted with the Goblins, the Elves in DM, and the others? o.O

This is a very interesting story, and I look forward to it's future chapters. The dialogue is fresh, the characters are well-rounded, and it's unraveling plot keeps me thinking. :)

I enjoyed this story immensely, I'm hoping you will update Chalk Hills quite soon!

The plot is suspenseful, and I can never guess what will happen next! What will happen to Rhys and Theron's relationship? What will they see when they find where the strings connect to?

I also liked how you incorporated alot of my favorite quests into the story, even making quite a fair bit of twists.

Till Chapter 4 Jennifer Hack.

Oh, wow, I really enjoyed this story~! The various chapter, that's what I'm guessing the numbers before each passage mean, are short but very well-written. Rhys is an interesting character, and the vague writing style you use is quite lovely~! I cannot wait for the next set of chapter~! :D