Great job!

Simply sweet and heartbreaking. And a little cute with Walter shipping them. :P

Awe! So cute!Poor Peter though.

I love the bittersweet ending of this, especially Walter watching them sleep.

i too had noticed that he seemed different. tired or runned down. this wasn't what i had in mind, but i love the angle you took! absolutely amazing! D

Most fics (and episodes, for that matter) are about Peter looking after Olivia so it's nice to see it from the other perspective.

I know it says complete, but would you consider a continuation?

Nice!

Just a friendly note that the commas go in the quotation marks and if there's a question mark in the quotation, there's no need for a comma. :)

"He gazed at her," he spoke.

"Well why don't you?" he asked.

Aw... That has got to be the sweetest P/O fic I've ever read. My insides are just melting for those two! Thanks for the read :)