I'm Really enjoying how you write these "off camera" scenes. You really capture the character's voices while adding unique insight into their motivations.

Ah, Alistair, I so want to cuddle and comfort him to make it all better - but I guess they're all mired enough in attempts at comfort ;)

I have to repeat myself, you have a wonderful way with words, particularly in portraying emotions, thanks for writing!

Bravo! I really liked how this was written and the internal conflict Alistair himself was going through was portrayed well. Good job :)

I personally always kind of pictured this encounter going like this. Nobody can hate each other as much as those two without it blowing up somewhere.

Well done.

Ok this is the most complicated love...erm, pentagon...ever.

The complications of who slept with whom and who loves whom etc really make this scenario work (I've never enjoyed the fact that it is mere duty getting Alistair to bed Morrigan)

Good job!