You had me worried there for a few minutes, thinking that Bombshell and Kickback were dead. DX I would have been most upset, had that remained the case.

On a lighter note, I'm quite amused by Shrapnel and Coronapis's relationship. chuckles They make a cute couple. :3

Of course, the same can be said of Kickback and Sway...

Which reminds me, I've been meaning to mention the fact that I'm impressed with your use of OCs. You make number - three? - that I've come across in the TF fandom (I haven't yet come across /anyone/ in other fandoms) who have managed to both create a myriad of original characters and use them so effectively that I forget that they aren't actually canon. I applaud you.

A great start to this story. You really have a knack for writing the Insecticons. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Very cute. I love the way you balance the OC's with the canon characters. I keep forgetting Sway wasn't on the show. Can't wait for the next one!

Another cute one. ... Strange, I never noticed Insecticons are cute before. Poor Kickback. I'm really starting to like him. ... What's Starscream been up to all this time though? ('Hey Starscream, how would you like to try this cute little bonding trick. ... Where'd he disappear to all of a sudden?')