Hurrah, daniel written as a normal man for once.

Very hot and steamy but without being too explicit. Loved the build up and the realisation that Daniel came to.

Wonderful

Wow! That was scorching! Nothing hotter than Alpha!Daniel indulging in casual sex, Vala complying, and having them get more than they bargained for in the end.

In the words of Dong from sweet sixteen. (Oh sexy girlfriend) hehehe :D

Dark in the beginning and I liked it. From naughty to pure. Thanks.

Excellent. Good progression of their relationship. Though at one point I was getting nervous that he wouldn't realize how he felt.

I love this. I love the progression, the passion, the sex to love making. This is one of the best D/Vs I have ever read... lovely, sexy, and absolutely Daniel and Vala. I really appreciate the posting, i just loved it!

Had to love the escalation of the physical relationship, followed by the emotional catch up for Daniel and his connecting the dots. She stole his heart...he just had to do the inventory and realize who held it. Wonderfully done and just so Daniel! Had to like the way he surprised her with the declaration and that they were able to take to the next level. Very well done!;)