love your story so illbe waiting for your next chapter num 9 bye TMNT Kreative Tanke.

I like the story so far. :) It's really exciting that everything seems to be moving forward a little more quickly now.

I do have a couple things to say about this though...Please don't take this as a flame or anything. There are just a couple things that really stuck out to me and I thought I would mention them so that maybe you could look for things like that in the future?

I kind of like how both Martha and Donatello kind of expected things to have stayed the same. (Okay, I know I just warned you about all of the horrible things I was going to say, but I've actually ended up reviewing things in order. :) )

I feel like the whole "I immidiately forgot about you" thing is kind of...an obvious set up. I feel like after the first year or two they would have forgotten, but maybe have at least tried to get to the meeting spot...And I guess that kind of happened... I think the line about "Isn't funny that we both remembered at the same time?" is what made it a bit more sketchy to me.

I don't know if this is what you were going for, but to me it seems like Martha has something wrong with her brain. It could be psychological damage, or something else. Right now I don't really know what to do with the information I've recieved from the story, but you might be able to spin it into something really amazing to read. :D

I was a bit surprised by the hot chocolate causing her skin to peel...It was already mentioned that a small sip that she took of the hot chocolate described the beverage as being too hot for her tastes, but it didn't say that she burned her tounge. It just seemed like everything was a bit exagerated.

I think this story has a lot of potential. :) I'm looking forward to how things turn out. What I was noticing was just a lot of little things that made the story seem...a little loosely held together.

Super glad that you've been putting effort into this. Good luck with your writing!

wow. I can't wait to see martha's explination for this. The way you described their day out was really amazing. I love how much you made Don worry.

Hey! Sorry about not reviewing, school got hectic again xP But this chapter was so adorable and emotional! YOU'D BETTER UPDATE SOON!

OMG Yay u updated ur story! XD I'm sooo glad Donnie was able to catch up and meet Martha afta all that time! :) But poor Martha! Those scars! I hope she's okay plz update soon! XD

wow what happen to her. PLease update soon :D

Please don't stop writing your story. It's very interesting!

Hey! I love this story! I've never seen TMNT before, but this is really good :D keep it up chica! :D

Aw poor Donny! But I hope he finds Martha! You'd better update soon k? ;)

Donny's so valiant! x) I was sad when Martha found her mommy though cuz she had to leave Donny :( But I hope the present-day Martha can contact Donny! Next chapter!

NO NOT THE GANG AGAIN! Dx Protect her Donny! And LOL at his hug too XD Off to the nect chappy!

The interactions between Donny and martha are so cute :) Now chapter 5!

Right now I am SQUEALING at Donny's appearance in the chapter XD YOu portrayed him so wonderfully, it's so Donny-like! :D And I love Martha's innocence :) Now to chapter 4!

And once again, tears in my eyes! TT Amazing job again, and you're a meanie, Jack! *shakes fist* Poor Martha . . . off to the next chapter!

Oh my god I had tears in my eyes! The way you described Martha's feelings were AMAZING! You're a gifted writer! Off to the next chappy :D