Reviews for Webbing
tigerlily124 chapter 3 . 3/28/2015
Very interesting. I wouldn't mind reading more about this Spock. Thank you!
Mossclaw chapter 3 . 7/22/2013
I loved this! It was greatly written and made me laugh!
Guest chapter 3 . 10/21/2012
What did Amanda do to Spock in this universe?! It's hilarious to think that such a calm dignified smart honorable Vulcan would have long hair a pierced ear and cuss! Omg
mb chapter 3 . 6/6/2011
love your spock, human but still in character.

would love him in another story
ZodiacSnake chapter 3 . 9/22/2010
i dont even know where to begin knowing what to think of this exept that i loved it i dobt know what i think of it but i really do love it i mean really its amazing & had me in giggle fits through half of it!

Also where'd Spock's lil brother come from anyway?

the scene where Spocks having to hold Kirk so they can fix his back i really loved it just had such great emotion!
WickedBlue chapter 3 . 6/22/2010
Great fic. I love the more human Spock.
happyalien chapter 3 . 4/8/2010
I am thoroughly ashamed of the perviness that is my mind as after being witness to the adorableness that was that last scene the immediate thought that crept into my mind was threesome! -hangs head- :P Loved It :D
Renuki chapter 3 . 2/28/2010
*going D: at both Spock and Sarek*

...the ending amuse me so much! :D
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 3 . 2/28/2010
hahahahha just great nice job it was just perfect!
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 2 . 2/28/2010
u are killing me i am laughing so hard great job
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
i laughed so hard at this chapter ahahah and what Spock said about Kirk pure awsome great job
Harm Marie chapter 3 . 2/28/2010
Nice ending.
Ryen Selenity Caliburn chapter 2 . 2/9/2010
I like this.. it's cute.. and different.. completely different directions then a lot of other fics. :) It's cool how Spocks POV is completely changed and interesting how you explained it by the early scenes in the first chapter in a way. :)

Looking forward to more...

Ryen
shizzam chapter 2 . 2/8/2010
Whoo! New chapter. Looked great. Thankies for continuing. Spock, pff, you curse so much. It's charming. Also, the not-a-morning-person syndrome, cute.

I'm rather curious - what convinced Kirk it was good idea to come back and fight for the captaincy? The fact that Spock inherited the position would imply that Spock was first officer. Also, how did he intend to get rid of that other guy - he's not emotionally compromised. Was he just a temperamental idiot? Eh, poking holes in plots isn't very nice of me; maybe Kirk just wanted to take the captaincy with pure Kirk-force.

And now that I've come to think of it, was Spock Prime on Delta Vega and is he going to present himself to Spock? This is a different Spock, so he may not need the same encouraging.

Backtracking, the trial was awesome - here comes Spock to save the day. the phrase "Neat Star Fleet mandated grass" was just terrible - in an awesome way. "Full out Vulcan bitch-slap" also deserves props.

I have to admit, I like this line in particular: "Blue skin, green skin, pink skin, pale skin; they passed by him in a twirling blur as he made his way to a check station." Good imagery.

There are a few errors in spelling: "'hoped' the asshole lighted on fire" and "responsibility for the deaths that 'were' his due," but it's not a big deal.

I wonder how Spock ended up with the job of holding down Jim, but it makes perfect sense that Jim would return the favor. Their interaction is..adorable? Something like that.

For future reference - I'm a girl.

You're super awesome; keep writing.
Harm Marie chapter 2 . 2/8/2010
Really glad to see more of this.
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