That was nice, I liked it.

That card was really cute. Idk if Puck would really do it (I couldn't tell if there was supposed to be a little something going on?) but it definitely worked here.

Great story and quite original. I thought you made the character traits of Kurt and Puck edgey and fresh.

Oh, this was good. This was very good. I really liked that it didn't follow the normal fanfic pattern of their relationship. I loved loved LOVED the bit in the middle where Puck looks up the song, finds it's a duet... and gets Kurt with another slushie. Very in character, but with the friendship undercurrent that I love (maybe not at that part, but yeah :D)

i find it ironic how your last line was "And so they walk the line." when it would seem that they are anything but walking the line. But i guess that's what you're trying to convey: the irony of it all. am i right?

Title is very appropriate though.

once again, mad writing skills! love this one-shot! and yes, please don't add anything to it. it's perfect as it is.