Are you going to keep writing this?
Because it was really good!

ok that was great. i loved how you wrote that, because it was like reading a short story by john flanagan

Awww! Nice!

This scene is great...it matches the tone of the books well. :-)

That one was actually pretty good. The part with Will infiltrating Master Chub's kitchen was impressive and I chuckled at the report-to-the-baron speech. However, I would have thought that it would be Alyss and not Jenny who would ask Will if he's alright as Jenny wanted to become a cook. In light of that, I would think that she'd feel the punishment was suited. But hey! That's just me. Overall, it was a chapter well done. Oh, before I forget I have only one more qualm. You wrote one part that goes something like...

...Respect. Vague, but there.

That just doesn't work for some reason and feels choppy if you get my meaning. You could change it to be something like...

...Respect. It was a vague feeling, but respect nonetheless.

Of course, it is your story and totally up to you. I give you my wholehearted congrats. I'll be sure to check out your other stories shortly.

Awww... What a cute story! It was so well written, too! Keep writing. ~Pixie

I really liked this story! It brought a smile to my face.

Hahaha I'm not into reading one shots because of knowing that when I get to the end of the page it's going to be finished. But when I read the summary I really wanted to read it. I always wondered what had happened with the whole sweets story, and maybe this isn't the actual one, but I know for sure it's going to be the best one!

I really liked it, and it was ended quite nicely! Oh and now that I see I thought this was going to be a one shot but it seems you put in your A/N " She's volunteered (shockingly) to beta the next chapters, as well." Next chapters? There's more to come? :D. Oh that's wonderful! It's been so much more then half a year now and I'm wondering if you decided to keep this a one-shot. I really hope you tell us if it's a one shot or not! And if you will continue writing the story! I really hope you do! Loved this chappie :).

~Ice

D'aww, I really like how this version of Wills infamous climb to the coockies turned out! Well written from Halts Pov, and the ending fits it perfectly. Good job!

:D Please continue!

very nice, i like how your writing isn't just cut and dry: this happened, then this, then this. there is actual detail! yay! i'll put this on alerts!

Aw, this was just plain adorable. I've seen a few adaptions of this event, and this is by far the best. You write beautifully and clearly, and have a good sense of humor. You also have good grammar and phrasing. I can tell because I actually got to picture the story in my head, rather than being distracted by miss-punctuated sentences and thinking of how I would rephrase the whole thing. :P Very, very well done! I loved it very much!

The only thing I must disagree on was your mention that Master Chubb had a 'cheerful' attitude. I always pictured him as kind of grumpy. But hey, everyone has their own take on things.

I love adorable little fics like this one. (I'm a sap, I know) You did a good job keeping Halt in character, too - a high order for a more fluffy, sentimental plot device such as this. Double Kudos and brownie points!

And... Did I read wrong, or did you say on your profile that this is a WIP? There's MORE? I do look forward to an update, if there are indeed updates to be had. :) :) :) :)

Great job!

-Elfpen

Hahahahahahahahaha! That was SO funny! Except the Willers got whacked part, of course...that wasn't so funny. . But I love it! Keep up the great work! .

This is very sweet and creative. The only thing that I would remark upon is that Will's hair was "close-cropped." The hairstyles of the time were usually longer, maybe jawline to mid-neck. Otherwise, awesome!