omg pls write a sequel!

Edmund. Sweetie. Just. Chill it for a moment there, m’kay? You don’t own her. If Unity has fucked around a lot, that’s her choice. Tone down the sexism, love, she has every right to do it.

Also, great job! I don’t think Unity is that much of an Mary Sue, though she does have that sarcastic, sassy, “cool as a cucumber in every situation” attitude that you will find in far too many insert-OC fics, which is fun to read and fun to write but just a tad cliche. Other than that, this was very well done, and thank you for writing it!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! DONT STOP THE STORY! WHEAT ABOUT SDMUND AND UNITY!?
ARE YOU TRYING TO TORTURE ME TO DEATH?! It seems so... :(. Well goodbye Peter, Lucy, Edmund, and Susan. [Inserts sad face]

DONT LET THEM GO THEN! Pleeeeaaassee! (Imagine a whiney voice here) :(

3, but Edmund will save Unity with Peter right? :0

Oh, shit. Unity is pissed.

lol, happiness. :)

I has left you... happiness! :)

HAPPINESS! :)

:( Unity.

HAPPINESS :). SADNESS :(. When Unity became unconscious, just like in the forest does that mean she's going to wake back up on earth? CONFUSED!

OH MY GOD, OH MY GOD, OH MY GOD, OH MY GOD! Confusion? Happiness? :( :)

PETER IS JELOUSE, OH MY GOD. HAPPINESS :)))

SHE WILL BE THE ONE TO DEFEAT THE KING GIANT (if there even is one). She will eventually wake up in a hospital out of her coma, or she will live in Narnia forever. :) Happiness

Peter, ooh (said to have a flirty attitude). Its obvious what's happening, so obvious.
HAPPINESS!