Oh my word, this is perfect. Their banter and arguments really rattle each other in the most personal of ways. It's crazy seeing how good of friends they can be while still not really realizing that they other won't believe their basic stands on the universe. This just... oh my gosh. So emotional. And at the end, that was so powerful. This is incredible.

Sapphireswimming

Aw, so very sad-making :(

REALY SHORT. but otherwise cool! it'z really well written, u captured ed's essence (did i spell that write? ... who cares?) just rite!

ur review page looked lonely so i decided to add another! :3 ur welcome!

good :)

I review!

dose happy dance then goes back to homework

That was really good. I love fics like these: where Alfons tries to communicate that he's real and he is not Alphonse Elric. You did an awesome job of communicating Heidrich and the whole thing is well written. *Favourites*

This is so sad! Great job though! Haha,

Ah, GOD story. I always find that people struggle to get Ed's dialogue right so that it flows just the way it's supposed to (ahaha yes annoyingly vague but still true, if you know what I mean) but you really hit the mark on that particular area. And nice finishing paragraph too. Overall very good .