| Reviews for A Love Not Too Soon To Be Forgotten |
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   Ashandmayalltheway chapter 8 . 7/3 pikachu watching ash and may make out on ash’s shoulder: |
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/19 Best story everr️️️ |
| Legalt chapter 10 . 11/3/2019 God, I should've known this was coming. From a great story to whack. Such artificial and cliche drama, I swear... At least for those that read a lot. I mean, really? Builds up then comes crashing down because of some misunderstanding or whatever that people refuse to work through, then MC goes through a depressive or negative montage, then things get better again... I skimmed ahead and STILL feel unsatisfied... because imo with nearly pure romance this only works in really long fics where it's a one time deal and the relationship can show much more afterwards... Like I dunno, maybe growing up more, marriage, then kids? I feel like I just wasted hours of my life. Ranting over. Anyway, great writing and what not. Above many fics on here. Honestly. Only wish it didn't have to be like this :/, but I do admit that I'm just someone who doesn't like drama in this way like others do, so I could be biased. |
| MintyFresh124 chapter 1 . 8/6/2019 Geez Man You're soo talented! I wish you wrote more stories! Made what someone would make into a one-shot into a full story with likable characters and an OC! You would be my inspiration if I ever wrote my own Fanfic! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/16/2019 Really awesome |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/27/2018 ONE OF THE BEST ASHXMAY FANFICS IVE EVER READ I REALLY REALLYYY LOVED IT |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2018 Man ...you did an awesome job... your imagination and ideas about the story was innovative and a whole new concept into pokemon fanfiction ...great job ...please make one for amourshipping too |
| Western-Otaku chapter 12 . 12/15/2017 Aww that was a sweet story, and Ash actually achieved his dream at his first try in this universe haha, really enjoyed reading |
| advancyashmay chapter 1 . 5/11/2017 It wassss a greattt story... I really liked it It was fantastic... Hope you made another Advanceshipping soon |
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/29/2017 Fox: Good work Usually a pokeshipping fan but you changed my views |
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/20/2017 I like Ash and May together . |
| Divij D chapter 12 . 11/6/2016 Bro... so good... I envy you. . But, it is a skill people are born with. But, if I or anybody else would have been in your place, I would have written another chapter and let the romance between May and Dawn reach its peak. And then talking about some more and a happy ending... |
| Dragonfyre1234 chapter 12 . 11/5/2016 The feels...man this was a great story |
| will chapter 8 . 8/29/2016 the hentai part was too much! |
| Thunderstorm chapter 12 . 5/20/2016 Great fanfic du |
