Nice chapter

pls continue this story its been years since you last updated. I really wont to know if Naruto wil become a pirate or stay with the marines when he finds out about Hina.

Will you ever update this super story?

Air air or Kyuubi no Yoko

All of that fruit pretty much idiotic . And mizu mizu can’t exist cuz fruits don’t work in water

Lol Naruto looks like a dlc character

Please fucking harem of Robin and Hancock that's all I want I will be in your debt add more if you want hell add shirahoshi and Bonney for all I care but please Hancock and Robin are a must.

oof

I like how 2 of the fruits here exist in the story, the dragon and the time fruit

Sun fruit is good. Logia higher than magma

The time time fruit is too op because it is a concept instead of an element, which means that nothing can actually harm time itself.

PLEASE CHANGE THE SUMMARY. It's great, but only fills me with sheer disappointment at the end because the end isn't even the end! You basically promised a Naruto & Luffy fic only to give ONLY Naruto x harem!

It's good when I ignore all the harem and flirting isht and I'm scream at how original this is but also at how I've been waiting to read just how Naruto's going to turncoat by Luffy and you dragged us till the last chapter and ended it before it even started?!

Please update its been 6 years!

Shit you pulled with Hina was bad for the story. Vegapunk was supposed to be one of Naruto's most trusted friends. No wonder this died out.