This made me cry... It's so sad yet determined and I can't help but think that in the end, Alfons /did/ help him, even if Ed did disdain it. ; I love the thought of this.

Sad, and short, but still well written.

CONTINUE THIS! CONTINUE THIS, PLEASE! I really ant to know what happens when he finds out. It inrigues me.
~Emma

aw,

that was so sad

i love alfonz heidrich, almost as much as the real al

...

almost.

this was really good :)