Well goddam... this story is like, so detailed... Good work c:

How does my mouth manage to feel so dry when I'm an inch away from drooling?

Veeeery nice. Really schmexy. Love this.

This was soooo awesome!

This was good. I am a fan of seme Al and I can really appreciate a piece like this. Slight bondage and his quiet way of domineering, I really really enjoyed reading this. It was descriptive, but not excessively so. And Ed's reasons for not fighting it aren't completely ridiculous.

All in all, it was interesting and fun to read

I've found myself crawling back to my Elricest phase and I'm greeted wih something like this! It was delicious and I'm one of the rare few that prefer Al as seme.

Thank you for writing this and I absolutely loved the light bondage. Al seems like someone who would do something like that despite his innocent demeanor no?

Thanks again for putting this out there, it was great :)

Seme, dominant Alphonse is an interesting take for me but you write it so well that I can't complain. And the detail in your story make it impossible to complain about it, keep it up!

u r one of the few authors who writes more than 1 AlEd fanfic instead of EdAl. Personally, I prefer AlEd more, so ur stories' existence really comfort me... it's so hard to find AlEd stories! Thx for sharing~~~

I like it! **

Kyaa! Light bondage too? You are awesome. I like a controlling, dominant Alphonse. It's super sexy and unexpected. Totally love it. _

hehe this is amazing

Very different. I like it though. I've learned that sometimes the "innocent" ones are the most pervy/dirty with the odd sex fetishes. Really hot story. Good job. )

That...was...HOTT! I would have liked a gag, but it was hot and steamy and dominating. Very well done.

its ununsual but very good :)

Bah, every time I forget that I like Elricest someone comes along and writes something like this. For some reason I feel like that's a bad thing... but I don't know why.

Hehe, lovelylovely.