Reviews for The Colder Water |
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katcat chapter 6 . 1/11 This was awesome! I am very much going to imagine tht after this they'll be taking Sasuke and going off to be a happy farm couple together. Thank you for writing this! I loved the characterization of Shisui and he seemed like the perfect lens to view this story from! |
Galimaufry chapter 6 . 9/5/2018 I want you to know that I read this story back when it was first posted - and I have reread it a few times over the years since then. It got me through graduating high school, college, and the first stressful months of my adult life. This is, quite possibly, the favorite fic that I have ever read. It's quiet and melancholy and makes me laugh at these crazy kids' antics. I dont think I've ever found another story that takes canon and fills out the gaps in a way that improves the source like this one does. I know that canon got shook up after this was published, but for me your story is the one that rings truest. Thank you so much for putting this out there; your words have meant so much to me and I hope will continue to do so. I hope that wherever you are in your life, its treating you kindly. |
KuroitsukiNoMai chapter 6 . 8/19/2018 I love this! Admittedly I haven't read many fanfiction where Shisui has a larger role, but I thought this was a really fresh take on Itachi, Shisui, and the Uchiha clan. Honestly I was hoping the story would go all the way up to Shisui's death, but this ending fits. Thanks for sharing! |
iBloo chapter 3 . 4/8/2018 “Oh my ffff...” the girl uttered. She quickly put her phone face down on the table, and covered her mouth. Her mind was racing a million miles a second. “They kissed,” she whispered disbelievingly. “THEY FRIGGIN OH MY GOD!” She flailed her arms around and squealed. She continued to do so for a full minute. Don’t mind me. I just had to narrate what the hell happened to me when I read what happened. I died when they kissed again. You are an amazing writer and OMG. I cannot wait to read more. You are making me fall in love with Shisui with every word you write. Thank you so much for publishing your work! |
iBloo chapter 2 . 4/6/2018 “Three Uchihas walk into a bar” that had me dying. I love this chapter so much. Thank you thank you thank you for writing this! |
iBloo chapter 1 . 4/5/2018 Getting a glimpse into Shisui’s thoughts, feelings, and past just makes me love him all the more. I can’t really figure out what Hiruzen really wants. I hope it gets revealed soon. Thank you for this chapter and yay for more Shisui. Hihi. |
Lindt Luirae chapter 6 . 8/23/2017 sobs so hard it hurts my chest. That was so utterly beautiful, and ao heart-wrenching and sweet and lovely and this is so beautiful and wow I'm in pain |
Lindt Luirae chapter 5 . 8/23/2017 Oh my god this is getting so intense I'm kinda breathless |
Lindt Luirae chapter 4 . 8/23/2017 This is so brilliantly written I'm aching. It fills so muh blog holes |
Lindt Luirae chapter 2 . 8/21/2017 This is so SO good oh my god I'm dying |
Lindt Luirae chapter 1 . 8/21/2017 Good god I love the way you write Shisui so much |
Hannahmayski chapter 6 . 8/17/2017 This was so good holy shit?! I had to go on this excursion for school and the bus broke down and I entertained myself in the time we were stuck on the side of the road by reading this AND IT WAS AWESOME! Made the trip actually seem worth it! Anyway, this was an absolute pleasure to read, thank you! |
Guest chapter 6 . 6/23/2017 I dig the plot and characterization of everyone in this story, so good job on that! But the thing is, the execution of the story is overly complicated and certain descriptions just drag on and on with the purpose of making the story have more 'depth' but they turn out to be unnecessary and just make the readers confused over things that aren't important to the plot. Sadly I see a lot of writers do this, using long and difficult descriptive passages to make the story look complex and all. You can simplify the descriptions without sacrificing quality, you know, as all great writers do :) Anyway, hope you take this as a constructive criticism and not a flame, because I do like this story! |
Hisakii chapter 6 . 3/21/2017 Wow... just wow... Beautiful, awesome and sad. T_T Thank for writing this. |
dangogo chapter 6 . 10/14/2016 wtf? this is literally the most amazing shisui centric fic i've ever read in my life and probably will be the best i will ever read and like? my heart is broken this is such a masterpiece |