Trash writing

ya know that the tree climbing thing was in the first season of naruto? it was an early episode too

Sure am glad you stopped writing.

This was an intresting story and for the time it was made some of the issues in cohesion with the manga and anime are understandable. There are a few problems though.

The first is that we just have a rather large cliff hanger during the built up focus of the story the chunnin exams finals. We are and likely will be forever stuck here as this story is likely abandoned. This is annoying but a common place authors drop stories on this site.

My real issue is the revisionist statements and scenes in the story that makes parts of the story contradict its self. Sakura was learning a better style from Guy using Sasuke sparing with Lee as an excuse for being there but you have Naruto (who introduced Sasuke and Lee) and Sakura not know team Guy. You also implied that Sakura needed an instructor to start learning the mednin fighting style when you stated she was learning it from Guy. You also state that Neji wasn't aware of Hinata's transformation over months, that Naruto asking for a beginner scroll on sealing was learning throughout the academy in secret, and Naruto was almost recruited into Root and there were no repercussions to Danzo for trying that or special instructions/ missions to have Naruto be tied further into the hokage's powerbase and trained as a counter to Danzo's move. Ibiki was literally looking for an excuse to kill Danzo in the chunin exams and this would have been enough.

My only other issues were mainly focused on Naruto and Sasuke. Mainly Sasuke being a fire element and not lightning for him. Naruto on the other hand had the issue of his chakra reserves. Episode 1 of the manga shows Naruto has the most chakra in Kohona bar none his causal ability to make shadow clones is one part but he makes over 100 in the first episode. A shadow clone is a B rank technique they are also chakra cost heavy so we know it would be at minimum B rank cost Kakashi states in the chunin exams arc that he can only perform the chidori 4-6 times even assuming this is a borderline s rank technique in chakra cost unless the cost is 15-20 times larger than a shadow clone Naruto has more chakra than Kakashi.

I know we never get a measurement for Chakra in the manga but it took Kakashi 3 years to double his reserves assuming it isn't a linear growth model for chakra growth and would be a more percential based a drastic increase in chakra cost between 2 levels of this magnitude makes no sense.

you HOPEFULLY know this by now... but if you write any new Naruto fics after I post this... Hakus techniques are Ice Release... or HYOTON if you're using japanese... not Aisu... that just means Ice: Demonic ice Mirrors.

Idk ino joining in with sakura and naruto kinda ruined the charm of this fic I came for a sakura x naruto story and I dont even favor that pairing and then this caught my eye with the way sakura and naruto get stronger together and how sakura gradually changes and then ino gets joined in on the little secret group and it ruined it for me

Mmm damn that scene with Haku and Hinata is hot hot hot! I am not surprised Ino got so turned on and I am impressed Naruto himself was not more inspired. ;P The rest was fantastic as well.

There's a serious problem with this fic:

Kakashi does not have to be a genius to know famous clan names like "Uzumaki" are not generalyl given to random orphans. Nor does he have to be a genius to know his sensei was romancing one Kushina Uzumaki, who became PREGNANT... and gave birth around the time of the Kyuubi attack... and Naruto looks like a mini Minato.

No really there is no possible reason to go witht aht fanon unless you just want to bash the guy who's probably trying to teach the kids to start adapting to patterns, study/train by themselves, etc.

Ayy I know it's been like 7 years and I don't even know if you write fanfictions any more but I just read this story cause recently I've been getting fairly into Naruto and I actually enjoyed it a lot and thought that it was really awesome. If by any chance you see this I would actually love to see the story started back into, because it was very enjoyable to read. Hopefully you see this, and hopefully you start back into this because seeing where you can take this after so long would be amazing, as now Shippuden is over as well and you could actually take it further than the original series.
Hope you see this,
Just some dude who thought this was a good fanfiction.

WOW...
Naruto is deadly in this story. I feel sorry for the Uchiha...

Ok, the only thing i don't like about this chapter is Ino joining Naruto and Sakura. I never seen as a romantic interest for Naruto. That was weird...

That was hot make out scence between Sakura and Naruto!. By the way, i'm glad Hinata is lesbian.
No complications there...

Really surprised that Naruto didn't kill Haku, i wonder what he has in store for Haku.
I'M FRIGHTENED...

I wonder why Kakashi is favoring Sasuke, i really want the answer to that. I like the chemistry between Naruto and Sakura, however it's kinda weird that Sakura is eleven years old, and Naruto is thirteen. Would've preferred you made them the same age...

Holy shit!, you're hell of a writer. I am very impressed how you went in depth on Team seven's point of view and fighting style. You got skill dude!. You described it so clearly that i could picture it in my mind. You go down as one of my favorite authors.