Reviews for The Illogically Frayed Shuffle
X-INACTIVE chapter 10 . 4/28/2011
Omg this is amazing.

I got sad a lot. YOU DO THIS TO ME! _"

But I love it!

~Thomas~
Annie chapter 10 . 6/16/2010
I love these... they're short but somehow VERY meaningful... D Keep them coming please!

Also... I play the song you used while reading and I would really REALLY love if you could write something with "Where the story ends"? ) Lovely lyrics in my opinion...! Maybe an AltMal? :D

Anyway, just an idea...! These are awesome! Thanks a lot!
OldSchoolOldSchool chapter 10 . 6/16/2010
Awesome. This is fantastic, please keep writing! I can't wait to see the rest of them.
neverlife chapter 10 . 6/16/2010
Awww, that's pretty sweet of Shaun (in his own way)
LollerpopOfEvil chapter 9 . 3/27/2010
Aw...poor Leo...
Rio 2.0 chapter 7 . 3/25/2010
I love this one so much.

the bitter angst at the end gets to me every time.

If you're taking suggestions, a little sequel perhaps? I'm a sucker for angst, but I like happy endings! ahahaha

X3
RavenGhost chapter 9 . 3/25/2010
WOOT for one-shots! *dances* Love them all! I felt bad for Ezio when his family was murdered as well-though at first I was all 'they can't kill a little kid in a video game...can they?' *dude pulls lever* "HOLY CRAP THEY CAN!" The sadest part about that is if you go back to Ezio's home WAY later in the game and stand in the center-the area goes dark and quiet, and you can see the ghosts of your family.

And what sick asshole rapes Leonardo! O.O I shall killz them! Ahem-in any case, great one shots! I eagerly await more!
AngelGardian666 chapter 8 . 2/25/2010
Thank you!

I really like this, even though its not them 'together' its really cool for them to be friends.

Poor guys, Federico loses his baby bros and Kadar loses his big bro.

And POOR PETRUCCIO.
LollerpopOfEvil chapter 8 . 2/23/2010
Chapter 8 was adorable but SO SAD!
LollerpopOfEvil chapter 7 . 2/20/2010
I wufflez this sho much!
AngelGardian666 chapter 6 . 2/17/2010
I love these! And I encourage you to keep writing!

also can we get some dead!bro love? Like some Ghost!KadarxGhost!Federico? Maybe a little oneshot yes?

Also more AltMal!
Miss Ziya chapter 6 . 2/12/2010
Poor Lucy. Though as sorry as I feel for her, I'm glad it's Shaun Desmond is obviously going for. I can just see Desmond listening to Shaun, the actual words being ignored.
Joveesia chapter 6 . 2/12/2010
This is a cute set of drabbles~ Although cute might not be the right word, I hope you know what I mean XD

Desmond/Shaun is probably my favorite and I really don't think that there's enough of it out there. So reading your stories with them makes me so happy. :] Please keep them up, you stoies really make my day and help reassure me that there are still authors who seem to update their stories. :3
Sono la Notte chapter 4 . 2/7/2010
for some reason, the some 'mama' by my chemical romance just popped into my head. "i could have been a better son" and all that?

rock on!
Sono la Notte chapter 3 . 2/2/2010
definately. more like a love try-angle. shaun and desmond could TOTALLY get together, but...it's not my place to say...XD
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