Aw, write more. I absolutely love your writing style.

I love the ending And Hiruma's wickey smiles. Do you mind if I translate this great fic into French? It would be my pleasure and you will get full credits. Thank you in advance and again congratulations on your hard work
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Cute and devil, this Suzuna! LOL poor Sena
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OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH! Lovely
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Cute! Very nice OS
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I love them so much, you are doing well with those! I am reading the chap now
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...I would like more please. I will throw money at my laptop screen for more. Just please make more. XD

Short, naughty, sexy, innocent, sweet, funny, romantic, and well-written! Everything I looked for in a fanfic is practically here. I absolutely adore what you have done with Suzuna, and I can totally imagine these things happening behind the scenes of Eyeshield 21. Give us more please!

I really wish you'd make more.

This were simply amazing. Not much of this pairing going around, but this was just so sweet that it almost makes it all better.

love this so far!

Ah, i love this fic x33

update

Protective!Taki. That made me laugh XD

I love the part about the ace getting together with the cheer captain. It'd normally be cliché but with these two it's just sweet. Great job!

Priceless! Nice chapter! I looked back and I think 18, 19, 20, & 22 seem like a good next stop, but that's all up to you.

ROFL the skirt is such a deadly weapon, as Sena knows far too well now.

Impractical surprises. Great for stories. Not so great for real life. You're good at these shorts, you should keep at it.