Beautiful pice! Loved
You can feel the love in this little one-shot

A beautiful piece of writing
Thank you
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This was truly beautiful ...

So good! I love your interpretation of Garrus- there's a brooding turian underneath all those hilarious comebacks.

An absolutely lovely story. I couldn't stop reading and didn't want it to ever end ... :)

Okay, I am seriously starting to fall in love with the way you just GET your characters. Another 5 star.

A simply fantastic one-shot. The word choice, the flow, the pacing... it all just works. It makes the prose come alive in a way that few authors on this site can capture. Best of all, it's touching and believable, and centered on my choice pairing! Again, fantastic.

This was such a wonderful read. I couldn't keep the smile off my face. Just f. 3

This has got to be the BEST Garrus/Femshep fanfic I've ever read. It's well-written and touching, and it definitely makes me adore this pairing even more than I already do.

Lovely...I've not been much of a Garrus/Shepard fan, but all the wonderful stories being posted about them are quickly converting me. Yours may be the icing on the cake! The moment when he turned off Shepard's translator and spoke to her was especially touching. Hope maybe you'll follow it up with the moment he actually tells her what he said. :D

U actually made me cry . . . thts rare. Good job! i 3 it!

very well played! I really like the way you made Shepard vunerable and unsure. I n the game she alomst came across as brash/vulgar (reach/flexibility) but in this story we get to see the totally unprepared, un-collected Shepard. Bravo!

i have read this story a couple of time it is so touching. good work!

I have to tell you that this is a wonderfully written piece. I'm so happy that there's good fanfic of this particular pairing. :) I LOVE your characterization of him. Hope to see more of him and your Shepard!

Poignant and lovely. A beautiful moment presented in fluid prose. Thanks for an excellent read.