i hope that it was just a dream and that jasper is really alive!

i love it!

please post the next chapter soon!

keep writing! sad but sweet

loved it !

i really luv dis story please update soon and i luv the song yoi used 4 his letter (jaspers) (if yoir reading this tim mcgraw) hes my fav singer but keep it up its great

dammit i cried good chap can't wait for more

This needs improvement.

You have grammar issues (capitalize the 'I'), spelling needs work and sometimes the sentences are awkward and need resturcturing. Get yourself an able beta reader and you'll see definate improvement.

Cheers,

JessieRedbird.

this is actually a really good story line I think. I've always liked bella/jasper stories and this one is completely different than the ones I have read so far. Just a tip some of the words are spelled wrong or you used the wrong spelling (since some have different spellings). Hope ya post again soon these stories help me wind down from school and my two jobs

Wow this was really good, I actually had goosebumps reading it, I am curious though...Is this going to turn to a complete Bella Edward story? Or are you bringing Jasper back?

Heartingly beautiful.