Amazing! I really loved the meeting part at the end. Poor ickle Rufus puts up with too much. I'd be just like Sephiroth if I was in his position. Anyway back on topic. I love your work thus far and expect great things from you! Your sentace structure is very good and your openning paragraghs always pull me in. Your descriptions of the characters fit excellantly and Reno's antics are too funny. You really must write more!

xD I like how you portrayed the meeting. It was really funny Poor Rufus...and poor Tseng, he's probably suffocating with the way Rufus has a hold on his tie.

That was really nice!

Keep up this good work!

Thanks! :)

(Poor Rufus; if I were in his shoes, I would have probably already murdered Scarlet xD )

ah, poor Rufus - at least he managed to get through the meeting. Angeal seems to have the hardest job, though life in the meeting doesn't sound particularly easy for any of them. Scarlet is...really creepy.

Wonderful little stories about Rufus! I would love to read more!

The party and the conversations are very lovely. Hope we can read more.

I really like this story. Please write until it's complete. You have made me very happy.

I Really like your work!

Thank you.

Once again, another perfect fic which was a pleasure to read. You are a very talented author. I love the way you explored and portrayed the relationship between Rufus and his Turks.

really amazing, a lovely party, im glad he got some small happiness, but very sad writing. wonderful to read :D

An absolutely amazing piece, really sweet and heartbreaking, especially the chapter with Sephiroth *hurries along to the next chapter*

Wow! I really am left amazed. It seems so real. I felt kinda sad for Rufus but at the same time I wondered and admired your ability to make him seem so strong. Never showing any weakness... And the end. It left some kind of strange feeling... I dunno. :-)

This is absolutly wonderful.

Rufus trouble childhood and I agree, he most certainly did not have a pleasant one.

Rufus lately, has made me all angsty and this just reinforces it. Poor guy can't cut a break at all in his life!

I think Elena was new to Shinra in FF7. When Zack died, she was not in Turks yet. It was Cissnei who worked with Tseng in Turks when they were about to rescue Zack.

Awww surprise party! :DDDDDDD

Awww sadness with stars and 'small things' :( sadness, but sweetness to it to soften the bitterness. good work!