Wow... the message in the poem is just so intense. you rlly get the emotions across.

I like this poem...it's sort of simple...but haunting.

This was a really nice poem about the cycle of sorrow and Akuma. I would enjoy seeing more.

About your comment about the Akuma souls looking like clowns, I think that that is a interesting thought. In a way the Akuma are just like pawns or clowns for the Earl; forced to his bidding; to entertain him

But don't mind my theorizing and such.

As I said before, great poem! :)