| Reviews for Direct Hit |
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ushmie chapter 2 . 9/3/2019 Still a favorite! A little intense on the “soulmates” angle but I loved it! Though I wouldn’t have minded a steamy scene or two... |
StarlingChild4 chapter 2 . 2/20/2019 I love this! It's a great combination of humor, sex(ual stuff), and jealous!Inuyasha that I can handle XD Problematic in real life, certainly, but perfectly suitable for a self-indulgent fic! I particularly loved the entire store line being "sucked into their drama" lol, because honestly, those situations are ones we humans LOVE to eat up! Great job! Sorry I took so long to review; I kept grinning the whole time rereading this! :D |
Cstorm86 chapter 2 . 11/25/2018 Holy moly! I loved this story. It's a perfect ending and I still need more. The characters are so well written and I've got to say my favorite part is him telling Hobo off. I can guarantee I'll be rereading this many times to come. |
Typicalyssa chapter 2 . 5/5/2018 Man! This story is hilarious! I could totally imagine everything going through Inuyasha's mind. Haha.. I bet someone failed so badly this time. Poor fella. |
Kylaralynn chapter 2 . 10/28/2017 Should I really get so much amusement from someone else's struggles? Because that was hilarious. |
Alannada chapter 2 . 8/28/2017 Ahaha, it was great! I like Sango's powers/skill and the inukag was crazy 3 |
Astral Dragon Spirit chapter 2 . 4/11/2016 Such a funny and cute story. I wonder if one of the students actually failed or if the two of them got so excited from all papers he already graded that they just abandoned grading and moved straight to the bedroom. |
Kami2015 chapter 2 . 1/19/2016 Really great ending to this! I'm glad you didn't drag it out too long because it was rather sweet. And sweet things shouldn't be long lol. Anyways, great characters in this chapter. The modern world with demon things is still a bit weird, I would have just made them all human, but it worked out in the end. Inuyasha is funny and brutal. his character does grate on me a bit with all the swearing, but that is how he was in the show if I recall. Kagome is pretty funny, though dull. I would have like to have seen her fleshed out a bit more than what we got. Still, I would be lying if I didn't say I enjoyed her flirty side. Descriptions were crisp and didn't hold the work down. You knew the story you wanted to tell and you told it. Like I said in chapter one, this was an excellent idea. Really glad I read this, and I wish you luck in the future. Though now i should probably start on some of your other products. You may have just won over a fan :) |
dewrose chapter 2 . 6/11/2015 I was going back and reading some of the Inuyasha fan fics that I missed the past 5 years and came across this absolute gem. I loved the story. It made me smile and laugh. Very well written and a good story. Thanks for writing it. I hope you will write more short Inuyasha stories soon. Thanks again. |
animegirl73 chapter 2 . 2/3/2015 Loved it! Hearing how Inuyasha felt adds to the delight of the story. |
MadamScorpio chapter 2 . 10/30/2014 Poor students lol! Good story! M |
riceflower3 chapter 2 . 7/13/2014 They're so lovey-dovey. D XD I loved the story! :D :) ;) -kittyangelita1126 |
riceflower3 chapter 1 . 7/13/2014 Oooh… YeT Love how you progress with the story! :D |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/30/2014 i LOVED that fanfic. One of my favourite inuyasha fanfics. |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/18/2014 Good story! ..though they might get a surprise from his ex in three months or so.. |