Reviews for Beginnings
onewitchcat chapter 2 . 17h
Sasuke had to do what itachi did all those years ago. Poetic justice. Very sad but very fitting.
Avidreader212 chapter 2 . 7/28
This is probably one of my favorite stories and I have read it probably about 3 times. It’s very cute and fluffy, yet it has a nice plot that you kind of have to unwrap because it was told from the point of view of chibi-Naruto. I would love to read more stories like this one it is very well written.
palmtreehead chapter 10 . 5/18
I generally despise time travel but I really like Naruto saving Sasuke after he’s already well and truly blown it. Thanks for sharing
palmtreehead chapter 5 . 5/18
Awesome, love Hinata appearing and just being so Hinata. Thanks for sharing
Guest chapter 12 . 1/16
This is amazing. You haven't updated in a decade though- you OK?
Guest chapter 2 . 1/16
Senji is sasuke not itachi! Knew it!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/16
That sales lady is the real MVP here- giving someone almost universally hated a discount because he was about to cry!

More of her please.
Azure Shine chapter 2 . 11/23/2019
this chapter is so funny
Azure Shine chapter 2 . 11/23/2019
uk
Azure Shine chapter 1 . 11/23/2019
Sad, why Mikoto, whyyy? should she know naruto is son of kushina and minato? and Mikoto usually gentle, not like this especially called Naruto monster. but at last tgis last chapter is happy one
NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 12 . 11/17/2019
This was amazing!
I've been reading this non-stop since I started it
It's been such a ride of emotions, it's been cute and nerve-wracking and I absolutely loved it!
And these drabbles are so cute too!
Hahahha belching waffles, it took me a while to get it ahahha
Rivkah Slaine chapter 2 . 9/29/2019
This chapter made me laugh so much! Even with the sad parts. It also confirmed what I was suspicious of in Chapter one. I'm pretty sure that Senji is actually Sasuke from the future. There were little hints that made me think, some of the bigger ones being the lines on his face and the fact he knew about the mission to Wave.

Now I'm sure the technique he used on the Uchiha was the chidori. I was a little concerned that maybe Kakashi would get accused of the murders since he's supposedly the only one that knows and can use it. Since they can't pin the blame on Itachi and I dunno if anyone knows that Senji was there. Looking forward to finding all this out.
Jodles chapter 12 . 8/10/2019
Love this, kind of wish it was even longer and we could see the end results as the kids grew up! But it’s super cute and I love it so much as it stands~
CandyBurst chapter 2 . 3/28/2019
Naruto is the cutest thing on the planet.
CandyBurst chapter 1 . 3/28/2019
That was the cutest, fluffiest, most adorable thing I’ve ever read. It warms my heart and it’s just perfect.
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