good story, like that you write it from peter's POV

it's a good thing to be able to notice the color around us!

This is perfect. I have nothing else to say because that just about sums it up. I love this. (:

Interesting. Its a very artsy way of looking at things.

Interesting, I like it!

Cool story. Neal and Peter are spot on.

Very nice! This is a very goog trip into Neal thoughts about prison and his idea of life.

And i agree woth you prison made people gray and pale maybe we should find some others way to reform people even if they did orrible crime...

Are you by any chance an artist? I loved this!

wow I liked it please write more oneshots like this

Loved it! So well done. I sort of had an idea for a story like this floating around in my head and never wrote it. You definitely did it justice :)

Very well written and insightful.