I WANT MORE OF THIS

That was really good. I’d love to read more

can you please, make this a book? I really want to see the adventure that Ryan and Speed go on and what will be come of Ryan.

Please do a sequel where the team finds out! This oneshot is amazing and I'd really like to know what happens after!

Nice. Are you goin to write more its really goood can't wait to read
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I think this was one of the best fanfics I've read in awhile.

So, AWESOME!

interesting, would love a sequel)

Please write more.

I'm all for the threesome idea, and I hope you do it. I'm a huge Eric/Ryan shipper, and adding Speed into the mix is the icing in the cake. In the sequel, are you gonna include actual sex scenes?

I think you should do a sequel, though I'm not so sure about having a threesome with Eric.

Loved this story to death! ;)

I'd say just aware, it'd be a bit more amusing I think. Awesome story btw, enjoyed it immensely

You should write a sequel to this. Maybe where the team finds out about the relationship and that Speed's alive - sort of. I think it would be really cool and I'd totally read it.

do whatever you like, but you definitely should write more!

Oh I'd vote for the threesome thing. Whatever you decide I would be so up for reading. I like this take on the vamp AU. I certainly wouldn't mind seeing more.

The only thing I'd say you could work on is the transitioning of your scenes. It throws a person way off when a character is in one place with one person, and all of a sudden he's someplace else with other people. Like he just bam appeared there. Not trying to sound mean or anything cause you've

got awesome story telling vibe here. Hence the wanting to see

more, lol. Ok I'm gonna go lay down now.

LOVE IT! Wasn't too sure about a vampire fic but this... was great. Pity it's a one-shot though, it has so much potential for a longer fic.