For the record, Bob may just be my favourite splicer ever.

Ok, so far this one gets the prize, even if there's one better later, it still gets a friggin prize, hahahaha xD

Wut? Is Bob Jack's long lost cousin or something?

I think this is the funniest bit of Bioshock I've read!

Hah! Loved how "atlas" responded when jack caled fontaine a bastard. Also how the would you kinly phrase made jack not even remember what he was bieng ordered to do. :)

Omg! I was laughing soooo hard while reading this! Yea, now I'm grounded, again for being up this late at night...

I can't wait for their further misadventures! Is the Rumbler going to be a part of the team now?

cant wait for more

I just took a quick look in this chapter (even though I had already read it) and I found your referance to Left 4 Dead (Jack calling the splicer a tank).

well i have to said it was nice to read something of this again, it always make me laugh, so funny! just wondering how you're going to do the ryan part, that would be interesting to read, so looking foward for it!

Hell under Glass

I've read all of your new chapters. They're pretty funny.

Also, at the end of this chapter, you said to read MurderJunkie's story. What's the name of MurderJunkie's story?

Awesome chapter.

Happy to see you've updated after all this time. Personally, I was planning not to post anything till I've finished it to avoid this sort of problem from happening.

Anyways, nice to see that Rust and Rivets takes a turn for the funny with this chapter, most particularly with Claire's F-Bomb dropping, though I have to admit, Bob's sarcastic apology which was tied to whether or not he was going to get blown up by a rocket was much, much funnier.

Though I am kind of annoyed by how many skinnies (thin lines) there are in this chapter, I am rather happy that the content mostly beats my freakish obsession with formats and large paragraphs.

This is great XD I can't wait for an update!