this just proves that most blonde females are idiots and way too easy to rile up

It's Ok. The story is one sided and basically it's the movie with a side story added on. The main character, seems to me, to be very angry even from the start. I was only able to read to the end of charter 11 before I had to stop. I'm a little sad about that because it really is a good story it just needs some fine tuning, maybe have some of what Snake Eyes' is thinking.

Will the sequel be g I Joe retaliation? Please do that film xx

I don't understand why Isabella had to run ahead of the metal heads, why couldn't she just shoot at there backs, lot less likely to draw there fire that way, make much more sense to.

Devils Advocate,
I wrote this story a couple years ago so I understand that there's probably some sloppiness in the beginning chapters. But in Chapter 4, once Isabella speeds on home after crossing paths with Storm Shadow at the Masquerade, the writing does say this:

'Inside, she closed the door and for a few seconds, she set the gun down on her bed so that she could use both hands to tear the ball gown off her body. Then she swiftly sought out a pair of skinny jeans and a blue cami which she then threw on in its stead before picking up her gun once more so that she could ready herself for the worst. And then something hit her...
"Where's my blasted phone?!"

After reviewing the writings myself, I'll agree it was not the best description- it lacked detail and felt awfully rushed. I was still a fairly new writer when I constructed 'Come To Me'. But I can assure you I am far more efficient now. I hope this provides the clarification you sought. I'll also go back over my entire story and correct any other oversights that I may have made in the past. Thank you.

I don't understand when Isabella change out of her dress into day clothes, because from my understanding she was still in the ball gown when she was taken by storm shadow, perhaps you could clarify when that happened

When will the sequel be out?

I forgot, who did they remove? Was it Rip or...what's his face? I forgot the other guy's name.

I loved this story! Excellent writer! Can't wait for the sequel !

Excellent story. I am going to add you to my authors list now just to make sure I don't miss it lol. Bout time this chapter happened and I couldn't have asked for it anymore perfect or steamy ;D lol.

I loved this story very much. Very good ending X3 and I can't wait for your sequel, looking forward to it very much.

i nearly cried when i saw Come To Me on my updated stories.. oh man that was worth the wait.. and a sequel? oh you are an angel.. thank you!

looking forward to reading it. and so agree with your about the 2nd movie as well

loved it. lucky girl

So here I am awkwardly reading the last chapter with my sister in the room. XD Anyways I loved it and I'm excited to read the sequel-whenever it comes out!