And then it ends...awww, but the romancing was very nice and sweet.

Really good, I love the change in setting

Cool! I like the ending a lot, one can only imagine meeting the Gandors (lol, sounds like a movie title - Meet the Gandors). This is nicely done, how Chane's life might have been if the 'what if' was in the picture. :)

unique.

Omgosh! This was awesome! Wish there was more but this is a good I could read hiw she reacts to the rail well.I can dream.

Awww this was so cute!

soo cute!

no rail chaser? lol not that he didnt look bad drenched in blood that is

this was posted a little over a year ago, but i still feel like i should comment on it! XD It was really cute and i think you got Claire and Chane really in character! XD I especially liked Claire! You nailed him! XD I wish these were full blown chapters because I really like your writting style! XD I hope you decide to write more stories for Baccano! ANYWAY! I really enjoyed your story and I hope you write more (even though this was posted over a year ago)! XD

-Emil Lime

Awesome.

This story is amazing.

Funny, sweet and satisfying. It's short and sweet and to-the-point, which makes it great.

The attraction between the two runs from subtle to obvious and makes complete sense.

Great writing.

On the one hand this is a huge difference...on the other hand is it?

A thought provocing and entertaining, AU. I wonder if you could stand to expand the idea, I'd certainly read it.

Peace out and Rock on,

Anzer'ke.

I love the way you wrote this- it just feels like time's passing and Claire and Chane's relationship progressed from dating to marriage. It was brilliant. I love it. I can't wait to read more of your writing

This was very good for something made up of such short things. Very very impressive sir/madam.

Well done! The world needs more Clair/Chane fics. I loved how you told the story in short little chunks. It made the passing of time feel more real. I especially liked how you told the story from Chane's POV. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up!