Thank God I found your story. It's sad and funny at the same time. Thank you for sharing this story with us.

:) Awesome.

Lol. How sweet

The first part was nice, but this second part with Miyuki retelling the story to Ogata of all people is totally made of win. *grins* Brilliant.

Hahahaha, that ending was priceless! Priceless I say XD This was a very clever way to write the "Someday" talk that Akira's been waiting for. And I loved Miyuki too. Usually I really dislike OC's, but she totally fits in this story(second chapter especially) Brilliant! This story deserves more reviews D:

It was so cute! Akira's daughter sound especially cute! I loved the story. Snake, hihihii!

Ha ha, that was good! Awesome story and an interesting way to put it at that. Thank you! The last part with Ogata especially blew me away...

This is wonderful! Brilliant! I just love this and can't stop laughting! The Fairy Tale was so beautiful, and I almost cried in the end, and the second chapter with Ogata was just so hilarious! You definitely have to write more about this, or at least more fics like this!

-Jen

Now this was funny. I really couldn't help but laugh when Miyuki began the story.

Really, I love how Hikaru told his and Sai's story. It was amazing. You chose the best symbols for all the people mentioned, especially the phoenix for Sai. He truly is that amazing.

I don't have much else to say but how amazing this was. I really enjoyed reading it.

highly recommended

How lovely! The snake is quite likes Ogata but the baboon (LOL)definitely is Kuwabara sensei! XDDD

It's real a wonderful fairy tale!

Do you have any other HNG fictions? I'm looking foward seeing it soon! ~.

uh-oh... Run Hikaru from the Snake! I love how you drew parallels between the characters, it fits quite well!

I have to tell you, I absolutely love this story. It was just so absolutely adorable, I just had to share it with my siblings. There were only a few minor errors with punctuation, but nothing that took away from the story. I can't get over how much I love this story, and the sequel *ah* was priceless. The computer I was working on the first time I read the story wouldn't allow me to review it, so I had to find a computer that would let me. You did an excellent job, and, and, I love it!

Oh, I liked this. Way to go. The story was good, and kind of sweet, and the epilogue was hilarious. Oh Ogata, you make my day.

Ohoho, I wonder when will the baboon know about the story... And there should be a..um...pussy cat who want to beat the cub so he ask the dragon to teach him. ;p