Reviews for Twenty Kisses |
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Oreo596 chapter 9 . 1/30/2019 ️ |
Usagilisa2005 chapter 17 . 1/22/2019 OMG I loved this one, how he wanted to make the separation easier on her, just so well done *applause* |
Oreo596 chapter 19 . 7/3/2018 Awww |
Oreo596 chapter 18 . 7/3/2018 Love it! Great version of their first meeting!~ |
Oreo596 chapter 17 . 7/3/2018 Love this interpretation as well as the tieing in his thoughts of having to leave for America, telling her, and him going to by a ring. |
Oreo596 chapter 15 . 7/3/2018 Ya, not sure what that was... |
Oreo596 chapter 8 . 7/2/2018 Lol |
Oreo596 chapter 6 . 7/2/2018 Love that you added to this scene. |
Oreo596 chapter 1 . 7/2/2018 Nice |
Amber chapter 8 . 3/25/2018 That last line had me cracking up. Great. |
RoyalLovers1418 chapter 20 . 1/30/2018 Loved, loved, loved this fanfic! :) |
karseneau1 chapter 1 . 1/14/2018 Very good |
FloraOne chapter 20 . 1/5/2018 So, I will need to go back and still review last chapter, but first, this one! You included this one moment - where she stood there and couldn't believe the term wife was now hers. And he was so dumbfounded along that it would from now pn be in every day use. And that SO resonated with me,.because that was the exact flabbergasted, amazed feeling I had that day after my wedding. Weeks after, even! What am I saying, months! And now, years later, we still look each other from time to time, and it feels surreal for a moment that this wonderful person decided to commit himself to me and allowed the world to let me call him husband. And while I can't quite relate on a personal level to that end bit in your story (my husband took my name, so I never had that moment where I felt my old self was coming to an end - because I wad afraid of that very thing and my husband was not) I can at least relate to the notion that life does change a lot as you find this wonderful person to share it with, married or not, and extremly for the better. This was a joy to read, as was this story overall, and I want to congratulate you on finishing a story you started so long ago. It's a gift to fandom. Thank you so much for it! |
CassieRaven chapter 20 . 1/5/2018 Awww AngelMoonGirl, I can't believe this story is finished! It's over, kinda sad about it being over but how you ended it was lovely, just so perfect! Thank you for that lovely reader/reviewer shout out you gave to me, was so sweet! I am happy and honored to be a loyal reader-reviewer/fan to your work my fellow moonie fan and fellow moonie fan fic writer! To give one positive and kind feedback is what fuels and motivates us all as a fans and fan fiction writers, for sure. Cannot wait to see what you write/post next of a future story! |
Guest chapter 20 . 1/4/2018 Loved it! Plz write some more stories! |