Now this is a pretty funny story with my favorite series mixed in, Sayonara Zetsubou-Sensei! I do hope that there's an update soom, or you get more reviews. This story deserves more than it has.

OK listen SZG and listen well.

We all know that you are stealing again. Super knows this, as does Gladiator Beast MCK and Aprilfool1993. If you notice that your review meter is not filling up, its cause you refuse to respect that someone else wrote some of this material. At least you credit it as his idea to make Tsuruya into Kaiba in chap 6.

Go and think for a minute. Do you really want to be known as the kid that takes someones popular material and be seen as an idiot? Or do you want to make something that's different, something that is newer and will actually earn you some real reviews?

What I want you to do is this: Just think of an idea that isn't someone else's. Even if its not that good, as long as its yours, you will get the credit of having made it yourself. Try a oneshot, a simple one chapter story that won't have to take you forever to finish. Try to make it pure and with as much as you can say yourself as possible. Consider this a challenge.

If you need help, I can suggest somethings to read and use, and maybe an individual that can beta it for you. As for this, I suggest maybe taking it down or leaving it alone and trying on some better ideas instead of a crossover.

PS: You keep misspelling Taniguchi as "Tanaguchi" which is wrong.

This chapter has been done to many times to be funny anymore.

Nice! Good choice for 2 franchises to mix. Though I would like to see the characters of the opposite franchises mix more.

BUT HER NAME ISN'T FUNNY UNLESS THEY ARE MAILS! MAILU MAILU! MERU MERU! all of their names fit a certain word choice. T-T

Seems alright, and I note you apparently also watch YGO: Abridged.