Just why the fuck this story is m rated when there's no lemon? Chapter 13 had me scratching my hear... how & when did she got pregnant when they didn't had sex? Even if you didn't wanted to write the details you could've just mentioned something.. I hate this story man.. just why did I wasted my time reading this.. you're a horrible writer

Awww. I cant believe it's over! This is a beautiful story and I love it! I hope you include the wedding and more Chiaki - Sasuke interaction!
And you didn't include the LEMON! Why? !
Anyway I still like it, though

I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Just so naturally writen and somewhat realistic(beside the occassional cliche) but thats what made story so enjoyable. I loved every moment of it and Im so glad i stumbled upon this story! :)

This was awesome! I wish it was a little longer but I enjoyed it nonetheless.

wow itanaru is strangely cute

After all the things saying it didn't seem like Cinderella anymore, you say bring her back before midnight.
How much uncinderella are you willing to do now that the fairy godmother IS the stepmother?

Great doe. That was a joke

P.S. Too lazy to login so just put my name c;

Oh my god!1 I'm reading this like in 2014, AND URUGUAYAN yoy made me so happy with that coment even though it was four years ago! That was very kind of you, and what a coincidence, LOVE THIS STORY

Freedom. Big word. :)

DAT ABUSE! Dx

This was beautifully written. The time skip( s) were a tad confusing, though. I hope you do become a professional writer ! I'd love to read more !

Amazing story! I really liked it! I'm not exactly sure if the French is right, but I could possibly be. (I'm in my second year of learning French so it could be something I don't know yet.) I really liked it with all the mixment of things (Old style with things from now) and it was really good! I shall read more things by you now. ( that will most likely be awesome!)

I love it! Simply amazing :-)

AAAAAAHHHHHH! sakura chan is sick... does she have like yellow fever or something? I hope not...

Awesome story and an awesome ending.

I thought that the story was fairly good. It had a nice standard to it, however I would like to point out that you could have given the rebels some spotlight too. Given them a point in the story. It would make the story a little longer, and if possible, better. I also noticed that you did not write three years later above one of the previous chapters. I would love for you to just add that in order for people to not get confused. It's just a point of clarification. Otherwise the storyline was one of the best I've seen in my three years writing here on fanfiction . net. I hope that you take in my criticism, but also that I though that the story was really good. Keep on writing! / Foambanana