This is one of the darkest action stories you ever wrote.
Though you tied it up nicely in that last paragraph, lol.
But I can honestly say, everyone who reads it will be wishing they had his masseuse on speed dial, lol.
I still don't understand why Malachi took out his Triad to begin with.
I hope the specifics of that are yet to come.
It certainly would make for an interesting story, I'm sure!
As always your writing is top notch.
Thanks!

That was amazing! I am so into this AU. You are such a wonderful writer and even though I am a Sam girl, you seem to like the brother connection as much as I do. Besides your whole story arch and character development is so fanrasic that I can't resist. I hope you write some more because I am going to miss this world when I finish.

Well played, Malachi, well played. ;)

A nice ending to a brilliant story - thanks for a great read, as always!

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Fantastic chapter full of edge-of-your-seat drama and suspense - great work!

And I loved Malachi's role in this chapter. Very unexpected!

- Coolest Badguy EVER

Loved the conversation between Dean and Joshua - those boys have come so far! (:

And Dean taking control at the Brotherhood meeting was fantastic; very intense!

I also had a good laugh at Lenore's crush on (and Riley's obsession with) Castiel. A lovely little addition to the story!

Great stuff all round. (:

- Coolest Badguy EVER

A very dramatic near-escape for the boys - and what a cliffhanger!

Brilliant chapter (but now I'm keen for more Dean and Castiel, so on I go...)

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Haha, Malachi is awesome. I wonder if he and Crowley would get along... Hmm. Probably not. (:

Always nice to get some Josh in the story!

Great chapter!

- Coolest Badguy EVER

Vampires with contracts - the world is screwed. ;)

Nice chapter that answered a few questions, while still building the suspense. Fantastic work!

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Awww! Castiel is so cute! Don't you just want to hug him? :)

Awesome to see the "vegetarian vampires" again - Lenore is rather fantastic, in my opinion.

Thanks for the great chapter!

- Coolest Badguy EVER

"It's not unusual for men to experience certain 'sensations' during massage..."

"A Triad kind of feeling, asshole."

Hilarious start to the story! I loved Cas's method of gaining knowledge about the supernatural world - nice touch!

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is this one complete? it's missing it's stamp

WOW! I finally finished this story, I had read the first chapter then got side-tracked before you posted the second. this is one of those 'better late than never' deals on finishing. it was amazing, the twist and turns.

Dean and Mac arguing, Josh and Dean working so well together, Harris showing up saving Dean, Lenore and Kate again, the series never touched back on them did it?

I'm going to start the next story soon, can't wait to see how you all finish your season finale!

(Sorry if this doesn't make much sense, I'm scribbling things down as I go)

First one of these I've read in a while, and I was a little hazy on the details, but at the same time I didn't feel lost

Hehe, Castiel reading Twilight as research made me smile

The vampires having their own warped idea of a legal system was interesting

Loved Dean and Joshua's conversations and their team up

Aw I love Riley.

Have to say, I kinda like Malachi, I like how he manipulated everyone to get where and what he wanted

"I'm in apprenticeship to a demon?. Really? What happened to not wanting to compromise my virtue?" - That made me laugh, not sure if it was supposed to or not

absolutely love the story! great ending and I'm happy to provide the 200th review: congrats to the both of you (Author Beta).

This chapter had so much depth to it and read like a story all to itself. I can very clearly see how much work you both put into your stories and I hope you know how much your readers appreciate it. It really does show and it makes reading your works even more enjoyable. I thank you for this story and look forward to your next.