This story is awesome so far! Please continue, really wanna see how the reunion goes!

THAT WAS BEUTIFUL

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THE WAIT RETURNS!

I wonder where this will go...

Wow. This was solid. Love the concept, wish you would update very soon. The gritty atmosphere that I get from this fic is insane, and I think that fleshing out the friendship between Double D and Eddy would really make this fanfiction a lot heavier, especially if you get into their past and what caused Double D to leave, and if we do get Ed in the mix soon, that would make things really interested. Very pleased with this fanfiction, please update as soon as you can. This is a great concept, and I really think you can make something great out of this.

Liking where this is going waiting to see the back stories thats a first I've come across with Ed in a home I await more thansk for the update
Later Daze

No no please don't not the cliff don't leave me hanging why aw man anyway great job love it looking forward to more thanks for the read so far
Later Daze

This was beautiful. The words, the contrast, the style, everything. Simple, but with so much lying beneath it. Absolutely lovely.

(and I always love Edd angst...xD)

And so Edd sets out on his own. In a way it makes sense that he would be the first to venture out into the world.

This is kinda thoughtful and kinda melancholy and kinda really good.

Side note: this had better not happen to you.

Very good. It's very logical and emotional. I find myself identifying with this story greatly.

Will you be doing a follow up? You don't have to, just asking.