I'll be sure to check out the sequel, nice work!

mission accomplished, the aftermath is harder.

anora also makes for an interesting protagonist, she does an admirable job of playing the hand she's dealt

the canonical charge into denerim always did strike me as a fairly stupid idea

I suppose that the two of them are broken enough to make that choice after all

you are planning on have him survive arent you? and I doubt that it's going to be because of the dark ritual either...

I think it honestly works better as friendship than as romance, respect and history and duty are as heady things as love

i hope that someone writes a story where loghain wins the rebellion when maric doesnt survive, I get the feeling that he would make a good king if not for the blight and howe

there really are a lot of parallels between loghain and rowan, and a warden who romanced alistair and gave him up so that he could have the crown

you really do a good job of writing loghain's voice

it really stuck me as odd how none of the companions commented on the landsmeet, my ruthless carta dwarf had alistair publicly executed and none of them so much as bat an eye

if you wanted to be especially cruel to him you could have him survive the final battle where she passes away

I've always liked loghain, and the post landsmeet sceene is a veritable goldmine of drama that you use well

There's some serious ceiling to to this story. It's like reading a cathedral.

This was such a wonderful story I cannot wait to see what happens next.