let her breathe jeez and parents should give her more freedom, she had every right to react the way she did! dont make her in trouble for being human! and i think her getting hurt at the dusleys would have been much better...oh abuse is always so good in fanfics the reaction from her every time she would get in trouble would have brought the feels

But she had Lily's nose, thank goodness...

Lol Severus

i love the hard work but i was kinda hoping malfoy would not say that the would fall in love she would be a slytherin and be harrys brother\twin

I read all the 18th first chapters in one day. I so much love this story that i couldn't stop reading.

Albus is an ass!
Right now he makes me ill. Severel ill!

One question answered! There’s the prophecy! And it’s not the original. Love it!

I’ve been really enjoying this so far. I have one question re tile frame I know snapes memories were changed but obviously the history didn’t change...

How old was Elizabeth when lily and her went with james?
Was there a prophecy? Who heard it?
Was snape a death eater for a couple of months?! Can’t imagine how much trouble he’d have caused between L and E went into hiding and J and L dying?!

So many questions.

Love the idea though! And all the little original ideas!

It would be interesting to read a version of this story where Lucius never witnessed Albus checking on Elizabeth's records. And thus, Severus never got his memories returned. I wonder how differently Elizabeth's treatment would be from Harry's and if Severus would ever discover the truth...

My god this is just the sweetest story ever 3

An excellent story!

AMAZING

omg #thebestfanficever

I have a feel I'm really going to like this story. I always thought Snape should've been Harry's father in the movie and that James should've been like an agent or something to protect Lilly.
I'm honestly dissapointed there wasn't a confrontation between Snape and the Dursleys but I love the rest so far. :)

i would like it if you had made it till there was more of an argument between Remus and Elizabeth if you had to keep it to were she said what she did to Severus, but if you could have changed it then, I wish you had made it to where Severus talks to her.

i really liked this chapter, but i think it would have been better if you had made it to where Severus was a little mad at his daughter and she was able to explain why.