I liked it, and the poem went to the story perfectly

THIS STORY ROCKED i loved it, even though at first i thought cosmo should stay dead even though even i have written stories of her coming back, i prefer it if she stays dead just adds to her character and shows how important she wanted how herself how to end, but awesome story, just like shadow i think sometimes shadow should stay dead it would add so much character to him how much maria was important to him that he would die to fufill her promise not die and get reborn

This is how Sonic X should have ended for them. Nice story.